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| ... | ... | @@ -14,17 +14,17 @@ some good,<br /> |
| 14 | 14 | some rough,<br /> |
| 15 | 15 | and one labeled “1988”<br /> |
| 16 | 16 | —which, respectfully,<br /> |
| 17 | -we do not speak of.<br /> |
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| 17 | +we do not speak of. |
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| 18 | 18 | |
| 19 | 19 | And in every scene,<br /> |
| 20 | 20 | God was right there beside me,<br /> |
| 21 | 21 | carrying this<br /> |
| 22 | 22 | dented aluminum baseball bat<br /> |
| 23 | -with my name scratched into it like a prison shiv.<br /> |
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| 23 | +with my name scratched into it like a prison shiv. |
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| 24 | 24 | |
| 25 | 25 | Finally I asked,<br /> |
| 26 | 26 | "Okay… seriously.<br /> |
| 27 | -What’s with the bat?"<br /> |
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| 27 | +What’s with the bat?" |
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| 28 | 28 | |
| 29 | 29 | God gave me *that* look.<br /> |
| 30 | 30 | You know the one.<br /> |
| ... | ... | @@ -32,89 +32,89 @@ The<br /> |
| 32 | 32 | "I love you,<br /> |
| 33 | 33 | but come on, |
| 34 | 34 | you already know this"<br /> |
| 35 | -look.<br /> |
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| 35 | +look. |
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| 36 | 36 | |
| 37 | -And He said:<br /> |
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| 37 | +And He said: |
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| 38 | 38 | |
| 39 | 39 | “Listen.<br /> |
| 40 | 40 | My child.<br /> |
| 41 | -My beloved.<br /> |
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| 41 | +My beloved. |
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| 42 | 42 | |
| 43 | 43 | You do **not**<br /> |
| 44 | 44 | respond<br /> |
| 45 | -to gentle suggestion.<br /> |
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| 45 | +to gentle suggestion. |
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| 46 | 46 | |
| 47 | 47 | You do not ‘pick up on hints.’<br /> |
| 48 | 48 | You do not learn from<br /> |
| 49 | 49 | ‘quiet internal nudges.’<br /> |
| 50 | -No, no.<br /> |
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| 50 | +No, no. |
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| 51 | 51 | |
| 52 | -**You** —<br /> |
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| 52 | +**You** --<br /> |
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| 53 | 53 | require percussion.” |
| 54 | 54 | |
| 55 | -I stared at the bat. |
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| 56 | -I stared at the dents. |
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| 55 | +I stared at the bat.<br /> |
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| 56 | +I stared at the dents.<br /> |
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| 57 | 57 | I considered my entire track record of decision-making. |
| 58 | 58 | |
| 59 | 59 | “...Okay, valid,” I said. |
| 60 | 60 | |
| 61 | -I pointed at the biggest dent. |
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| 61 | +I pointed at the biggest dent.<br /> |
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| 62 | 62 | “That one… that’s when I—” |
| 63 | 63 | |
| 64 | -“Yes,” He said. |
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| 65 | -Immediately. |
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| 66 | -No hesitation. |
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| 64 | +“Yes,” He said.<br /> |
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| 65 | +Immediately.<br /> |
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| 66 | +No hesitation.<br /> |
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| 67 | 67 | We do not need to rehash that one. |
| 68 | 68 | |
| 69 | -I pointed at another. |
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| 69 | +I pointed at another.<br /> |
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| 70 | 70 | “And that one was—” |
| 71 | 71 | |
| 72 | -“Yes,” He said again, |
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| 72 | +“Yes,” He said again,<br /> |
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| 73 | 73 | even faster. |
| 74 | 74 | |
| 75 | -I pointed at one that looked like |
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| 75 | +I pointed at one that looked like<br /> |
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| 76 | 76 | He took a full Major League swing. |
| 77 | 77 | |
| 78 | -He didn’t even wait. |
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| 79 | -He just nodded, |
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| 80 | -slow, |
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| 81 | -meaningful, |
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| 78 | +He didn’t even wait.<br /> |
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| 79 | +He just nodded,<br /> |
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| 80 | +slow,<br /> |
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| 81 | +meaningful,<br /> |
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| 82 | 82 | like a man who has seen some things. |
| 83 | 83 | |
| 84 | -And I said, |
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| 85 | -“Alright, but— |
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| 86 | -Are these dents all the times |
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| 84 | +And I said,<br /> |
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| 85 | +“Alright, but—<br /> |
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| 86 | +Are these dents all the times<br /> |
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| 87 | 87 | You smacked me in the head?” |
| 88 | 88 | |
| 89 | -And God laughed. |
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| 90 | -Not a soft laugh. |
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| 91 | -A **Hah ... HAH!** |
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| 92 | -The laugh of someone who knows exactly |
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| 89 | +And God laughed.<br /> |
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| 90 | +Not a soft laugh.<br /> |
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| 91 | +A **Hah ... HAH!**<br /> |
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| 92 | +The laugh of someone who knows exactly<br /> |
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| 93 | 93 | who He is dealing with. |
| 94 | 94 | |
| 95 | -“No, child,” He said. |
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| 96 | -Very gently. |
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| 95 | +“No, child,” He said.<br /> |
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| 96 | +Very gently.<br /> |
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| 97 | 97 | Very simply. |
| 98 | 98 | |
| 99 | -“The dents are all the times |
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| 99 | +“The dents are all the times<br /> |
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| 100 | 100 | **you survived it.**” |
| 101 | 101 | |
| 102 | -And I felt it. |
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| 103 | -Right there. |
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| 104 | -Not in the head. |
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| 102 | +And I felt it.<br /> |
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| 103 | +Right there.<br /> |
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| 104 | +Not in the head.<br /> |
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| 105 | 105 | In the ribs. |
| 106 | 106 | |
| 107 | -Because yeah. |
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| 107 | +Because yeah.<br /> |
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| 108 | 108 | We’ve been doing this a long time. |
| 109 | 109 | |
| 110 | -I sighed. |
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| 111 | -Looked at the bat. |
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| 110 | +I sighed.<br /> |
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| 111 | +Looked at the bat.<br /> |
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| 112 | 112 | Looked at Him. |
| 113 | 113 | |
| 114 | 114 | “So ... did we have to use a bat?” |
| 115 | 115 | |
| 116 | -God just shrugged, |
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| 116 | +God just shrugged,<br /> |
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| 117 | 117 | like He’s been waiting **years** to say this line: |
| 118 | 118 | |
| 119 | -“You chose the bat. |
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| 119 | +“You chose the bat.<br /> |
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| 120 | 120 | I just agreed to swing it.” |